June 3, 2020

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READING

Raymond Chandler, The Big Sleep

My first foray into the gritty/detective/noir world. I’ve wanted to go there for a while. Reading in the Library of America edition, which includes Chandler’s early stories and his first three novels. Only just starting, but already everything I wanted it to be. Short lines, descriptions that cut. I mean, come on, this opening!

It was about eleven o’clock in the morning, mid October, with the sun not shining and a look of hard wet rain in the clearness of the foothills. I was wearing my powder–blue suit, with dark blue shirt, tie and display handkerchief, black brogues, black wool socks with dark blue clocks on them. I was neat, clean, shaved and sober, and I didn’t care who knew it. I was everything the well–dressed private detective ought to be. I was calling on four million dollars.

Wow wow wow… and elsewhere—

Tall, aren’t you” she said.
“I didn’t mean to be.”

And—

Neither of the two people in the room paid any attention to the way I came in, although only one of them was dead.

The sun is definitely not shining in this story, and the brooding dude at the center of everything is keeping one eye on those foothills. But maybe dude” isn’t quite the right word—

I’m a private dick on a case”

The vocabulary is just… so thoroughly 1939. Chandler’s stories are the quintessential pulp crime stories, and Marlowe the quintessential crime detective, because, of course, Chandler helped make the genre what it is. Marlowe must wear a long coat and hat. Must drink double scotches. Must drive one of those big old cars around the dusty streets of a sordid and unforgiving city. It must be overcast—in fact, the whole world must be in black and white. I can’t help but see Bogart’s portrayal of Marlowe as I read. All the pieces are inextricably linked in my mind. When I think detective, this is it. Certainly the genre is larger than Chandler. The book often shows its age. But there’s something so comforting in getting exactly what you expect when you turn a page.

Susan Sontag, Regarding the Pain of Others

Revisiting this one in our time of trouble. Sontag’s focus is photography, specifically the photography of war, and how we respond to it. There’s so much to chew on, from the culture/art perspective and from the how-do-humans-behave/we-live-in-a-society perspective. Which is the point: Sontag identifies photography as one place where the line between art and utility are particularly blurred—or better to say blended. Photographs act on us in many ways at once; we respond to photographs in many ways at once. Some other lessons—

  • A picture is not worth a thousand words. A picture never doesn’t need explanation. Relateldly,
  • Captions change pictures. Examples given of two sides in a war using the very same images for their respective propaganda campaigns, by just changing the captions. Pictures can lie, because it’s easy for the words around pictures to lie.
  • Authenticity is a messy business. It’s hard to argue that a shot hastily taken in the chaotic middle of an event isn’t more authentic than a shot carefully staged and lighted hours after the fact. But what do we really value in photography? The first of these pictures won’t look as good, most likely; and for a picture to do its work, it must look good, be striking, be memorable. It’s a difficult balance. If a gritty, authentic-looking photograph turns out to be a carefully calibrated artistic rendering of authenticity, what then? Sontag writes, we are surprised to learn they were staged, and always disappointed.”
  • Again: often, this all comes down to the words. A photograph itself can’t tell its own (often complicated) history. Its worth, its truth, its authenticity, are told— or omitted — by its caption.

One final point. The proliferation of pseudo–events these days, whose connection to reality is tenuous, and which exist primarily to be reported on, make us wonder: is there one reality underlying everything after all? Have all events become pseudo–events, reality overtaken by hyperreality? Perhaps events themselves no longer matter so much as what is said about them. To those in doubt, Sontag gives one of the most sobering slaps-in-the-face that I, anyway, have received in a long time—

To speak of reality becoming a spectacle is a breathtaking provincialism. It universalizes the viewing habits of a small, educated population living in the rich part of the world, where news has been converted into entertainment—that mature style of viewing which is a prime acquisition of the modern,” and a prerequisite for dismantling traditional forms of party–based politics that offer real disagreement and debate. It assumes that everyone is a spectator. It suggests, perversely, unseriously, that there is no real suffering in the world. But it is absurd to identify the world with those zones in the well–off countries where people have the dubious privilege of being spectators, or of declining to be spectators, of other people’s pain, just as it is absurd to generalize about the ability to respond to the sufferings of others on the basis of the mind–set of those consumers of news who know nothing at first hand about war and massive injustice and terror. There are hundreds of millions of television watchers who are far from inured to what they see on television. They do not have the luxury of patronizing reality.

Keep what’s what in front of you. If you are a spectator, remember that what you watch is very very real. I don’t have many for–sure thoughts re living in Current Year. But this I stand by: when you come across anything or anyone, online or off, contributing the the debasement of reality, do not engage.

John Ashbery, Wakefulness

I’ve been with these poems for a while now. Just baffling enough to wake me up in the morning, and just wistful enough to accompany me to sleep at night.

[I realize now that I’m reading all of these books in Library of America editions. Hooray for the LOA!]


LISTENING

Brian Eno, Discreet Music

I’ve known of Eno’s music since Theory IV and History of Music. But honestly I didn’t really listen to it then—and did pretty bad on on drop-the-needles as a result. Like everything studied in school, it’s so much better going back to it of my own free will a summer later. Discreet Music is Deno’s first album doing, like, what music history will forever remember Eno for doing: algorithmic–ish, tape delay, synth and ambient stuff. (How unfair, btw, that we start writing textbooks about people, codifying memory, before they’re even done working or living.)

I want to say more about the record’s incredible B side, the Variations on Pachelbel’s Canon, but that’ll keep. The title track, Discreet Music,” is haunting and thrilling and ~suspending~ It responds incredibly to what you want it be. I’ve been playing it in the background while reading Chandler, and let me tell you: it’s not a bad soundtrack for some trenchcoat sleuthing.


GARDENING

I was a bit late to put seeds in, so things are still slow and stubborn in appearing aboveground. But perhaps by dear embryonic plants simply have superior intuition. A powerful storm blew through last night, bringing some hail. My plot fared better for being bare than it might have otherwise.

As of now, one brave little bean plant lifts its shoulders from the dirt toward the sky. I was beyond relieved to see it a few days ago. No matter how often I tell myself that life wants to live, that my role is small, that there’s little I could do to truly harm the chances of these vegetabnles, I often don’t belive it. I want so desperately not to screw up, and I’m easily convinced that I’ve done everything wrong.

The garden is for me a dual exercise in patience and in hope. Self–distrust was beginning to creep in, when lo! A streak of green in the garden that is certifiably not just encroaching grass. My confidence is restored, for now, by the showing of these leaves.

Patence. Hope. And the daily work.

You go, smol bean. I need you.

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May 26, 2020

on style & the omnibus

You know group projects, right? The bane of high school and college careers, the worst kind of assignment. Reports and powerpoints and even papers written by six people thrown together by fate and the ill will of teachers. The trial of reconciling the research and writing of all group members into one finished product. Well, almost all members. Every group had that one who wouldn’t pull their weight…

And you know that particular style of writing, right? Which is to say no style and every style; the museum–of–modern–art eclectic hodge–podge that results when everyone writes their own section of the paper and ignores everyone else. Oxford comma, no Oxford comma, first person, third person… the cacophony of voices. You can tell that Bobby wrote pp. 1–2, that Jimmy wrote 3–4, that Danny wrote 5–6. No proofreading, no spellchecking, no consistency. Somebody just took all the separate docs — ctrl+c — ctrl+v — et voila. You’re lucky it’s all in the same font.

That’s how the latest House coronavirus bill reads to me.

I don’t mean the formatting on the page, which is equally horrible for all draft bills. I don’t even mean the boilerplate language, the unending provisos. The bill is appropriation after appropriation; it’s gonna be a lot of the same followed by a lot more of the same. Repetition here means all your bases are covered. Consistency is a comfort. I mean all the little tics, the little changes in voice. When consistency in language is just a copy/paste away, irregularities stand out. And this bill is so clearly the un–smoothed–over work of many hands.

Take how the bill refers to the virus itself. Most of the time it’s simply called coronavirus.” Sometimes, though, it’s Coronavirus Disease (COVID–19).” Other times, it’s the novel coronavirus (COVID–19).”

Sometimes Congress is referred to as the Congress.” Other times the Congress is simply called Congress.” Usually the money is appropriated generally to prevent, prepare for, and respond to coronavirus,” unless it’s to prevent, prepare for, and respond to the coronavirus.” And, occasionally, the money is to prevent, prepare for, and respond to coronavirus, domestically or internationally.”

Now, I don’t imagine for a moment that any bill is written by one person alone these days — let alone a massive omnibus like this. And I don’t expect all the tiny bits and bobs to be in just the right place— except— wait… I do. I’m troubled that all the folks who wrote this thing weren’t agreed on the basic questions of 1. what to call the virus and 2. what to call (the) Congress. I’m troubled by every missing comma and every article that vanishes and reappears. The lack of proofreading is no small matter. As the infamous Oxford comma case showed, the smallest grammar questions are quite significant when applied to the law of the land. Someday, will an agency be found to have used coronavirus money improperly because of a crucial missing modifier like domestically or internationally?” Courts are reluctant to speculate on the intentions of (the) Congress. They assume the plain text is intentional, which it should be. If one replies that the bill is just too big, or written to quickly, to maintain consistency, that seems like an argument for separate smaller bills and a more deliberate time–table — not an argument for the hastily–written omnibus.

I can only hope that someone has checked over the numbers more carefully than they have the words. The difference between $1,000,000 and $10,000,000 — or $100,000,000 and $1,000,000,000 — is a stiff price to pay for an accidental keystroke.

What’s true of all bills handed down by the leadership is true here as well: that for as many people who must have been involved in its drafting, so few of them were Members of the House. It’s not so bad that the bill is the work of a policy shop, but that it’s the work of the Speaker’s shop alone. Bring it to the floor with a closed rule, and there you have one of the great perversions of deliberative legislation in this country. Take a look at the number of bills shoved into the package, and it’s that many times worse. So many reams of paper sent out the door with the count of a single vote. 

In the Speaker we find another kind of undesirable group member: the far–too–serious group leader, who doesn’t lead the discussion so much as dominate it, who holds such a grip on the project that they won’t brook adjustments — even just to wording or grammar. With that kind of leader, how could there ever be discussion of substance? Members are howling to have a more active role; current results only confirm their complaints about process. Our consensus politics are at their best a successful group project. No one dominates, everyone participates, and the final product speaks with a unified voice.